Professional Children’s Book Editing to Help You Get Published—Traditionally or Independently
I’m Monique Stephens, a professional children’s book editor who helps aspiring children’s book authors refine their manuscripts with expert developmental editing, line editing, and mentoring. I polish your writing and strengthen your storytelling—so your story shines and connects with young readers. So your manuscript stands out to literary agents and traditional publishers. So your self-published book is truly ready for publication.
Whatever your path to children’s book publishing, I’m here to help you get there.
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About Me
I am a children’s book editor and author with more than 20 years of experience acquiring, editing, and writing for publishers including Scholastic, Penguin, Chronicle Books, and HarperCollins. I’ve helped dozens of writers turn their manuscripts into published books.
Whether you’re writing a picture book, chapter book, or middle-grade novel, I’ll give you clear, actionable feedback through developmental editing, line editing, or manuscript critiques. No matter if you’re getting ready to pitch to agents and publishers or planning to go the self-publishing route, I'll help you make your manuscript the best it can be.
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Services & Pricing Overview
Children’s Book Editing Services:
- Developmental Editing – From $315 (see Services & Fees page for tiers)
- Line Editing – From $525
- Children’s Manuscript Critiques – From $150–$300
- Query Letter & Cover Letter Critique – $100
- Children’s Book Mentoring & Consulting – $125/hour
- Writing Workshops for Children’s Authors – seasonal offerings
How It Works
- Choose a children’s book editing service.
- Secure your spot: Pay 50% deposit OR pay in full (save 5%).
- Submit your children’s book.
- Editing begins (timeline confirmed: usually 1–3 weeks depending on length).
- Receive professional editorial feedback + follow-up call (for developmental/line edits).